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Magnitude"I don't like your attitude,"
she said.
"I don't like your magnitude."
He fled.

"What the fuck did you just say,"
she cried!?
"I didn't mean it in that way!"
He lied.

She took a picture from the wall,
and tossed.
He tried to catch it, glass and all,
but lost.

"Don't you pull that shit with me,"
she said.
"On that, I think, we both agree."
He bled.
One, By OneSixteen drops fall;
one, by
one, by one, by
one, by one, by one, by
one, by one, by one, by one, by
one, by one, by one, by
one, by one, by
one. 

The beats of a song.
In life. 
In love. 
In loss. 
Keeping time.

Each one's end
is the next ones start. 
Every measure
straight from the heart. 

Seventeen drops fall;
one, by one.
YoursWhen I am alone;
I will never be lonely
with you in my life.

The darkest of nights
cannot extinguish the light
you bring to my world.

My heart was and is,
as it forever will be;
eternally yours.
1-1-2010One, one, twenty ten;
it will be a brand new start,
to the same old shit.
"The Heart"If you want to know right where I'm am;
take the path down the river,
not the one towards the dam.

There's a sign by the path, so it is known,
"I'm down near the bank
on a weathered stone."

Come tell me your troubles, I'll do what I can,
to ease your mind,
and steady your hand.

Most people know me, by just one name;
they call me "The Heart,"
and that's my aim.

So if you're sad, or down on your luck,
feeling heart broken,
feel like a schmuck,

lost your way, or you merely got lost,
come see "The Heart,"
there is no cost.

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SWS: Bullying

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Your tongue is like a knife.

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^3wyl Jan 17, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
I like how you've included a similar for this here... it's interesting because you could look into "knife" in a variety of ways, in a sense.

Simply put, but truly said indeed, I think. :clap:

I mean, bullying doesn't always have to be physical, so...

Yes, cool stuff, although not the concept, of course. :paranoid:
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`parliamentFunk Jan 17, 2011
Thank you. :hug:
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